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May. 3rd, 2009 11:08 pm
witticaster: (dressed for a funeral)
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So I tried to write out something that I mentioned to [livejournal.com profile] thereoncewas, that I've had in mind to write but haven't found a way to do well yet. I still don't think I succeeded here, and posting this is actually making me kind of skittery, but. It's a try, and so be it and et cetera.

Niko/Promise, like everything I write in tcls fandom is turning into.


Evenings found us walking together in Central Park, talking about past, present, and future. As of late, it was often past, and often Promise's. The bleak smiles that had sometimes accompanied her stories of life in plague times never seemed far from her face, but she spoke candidly.

It was in bed one night, when a particularly long strand of black pearls, looped twice loosely around her neck, rested between her breasts, that I asked her why. Why it was that she never came to bed unadorned.

I received a sad smile in return, and she shifted in my arms to look up at me. There we sat for several moments, as she chose her words.

"Because it's decadent," she finally said, idly rubbing a pearl between her fingers. "It's so ostentatious that it couldn't be understood as anything else."

What she did not say, what lurked within her words, was clear; it was written in the dark violet of her eyes. Promise sighed, breaking our shared gaze, and her face disappeared behind a curtain of sleek hair.

on 2009-05-04 04:41 am (UTC)
ext_90101: jason todd being uncharacteristic (Default)
Posted by [identity profile] pitselly.livejournal.com
IT IS NOT BAD HUSH. it's maybe a bit short, but that does not make it bad. I LIEK IT RITE MOAR.

on 2009-05-04 04:45 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] whoshotar.livejournal.com
LIES IT DOES NOT DO EITHER OF THE TWO THINGS I WANTED IT TO. but thank you for saying otherwise; maybe I'll get it entirely right next time I take a look at it. -_-

on 2009-05-04 04:45 am (UTC)
ext_90101: jason todd being uncharacteristic (Default)
Posted by [identity profile] pitselly.livejournal.com
AND YET it is interesting and I was interested and I liked it.

on 2009-05-04 11:41 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] written-doodles.livejournal.com
ajfhjakdhgjdh I LIKED IT OKAY. It was for sure interesting and quiet, if you get what I mean, idk, but I liked it and it was good! Promise and Niko are so hard to write, idk, I salute you.

on 2009-05-04 04:08 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] whoshotar.livejournal.com
They are basically all I write anymore for this fandom, ahahahaha. I will be the Promise/Niko writer for TCLS--or would be, if I put more stuff up publicly. IN ANY CASE, I'm glad you liked it okayish. I am not satisfied with it, but. >>

on 2009-05-04 07:45 pm (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] thereoncewas.livejournal.com
It is lovely, okay? Okay. You make Promise lovely.

on 2009-05-05 02:06 am (UTC)
Posted by [identity profile] whoshotar.livejournal.com
It does not do the things it was supposed to do, whine whine whine. I'm sorry I sound so terribly complain-y. It's currently frustrating me a lot that I can't seem to get it to do what I want it to. :-/ But I think that thinking about things in this vein has been really good for my understanding of Promise, augh. I'm glad she came off okay.